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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦39:The best present

发布时间:2014-07-31 17:50浏览次数：426次

要求：

你班计划举行一次以“The best present”为话题的英文主题班会课，老师要求每位同学写一篇短文，分享各自心目中的“最好礼物”，内容包括以下几个方面：
·你收到或送出的最好礼物是什么；
·礼物背后的小故事；
·该礼物的意义或启示。
The best present
What's the best present in my eyes?______________________________________________________________________________

注意：

1．词数80。短文要点表达不分先后，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；开头已为你写好，不计入总词数：

2．短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名和人名。

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In my memory,the best present that i received was a photo album,it came from my best friend,there are lots of photos in the album,there have me and lots of my friend,every photo was found by all kind of ways,when i took the present,i was very moved,that is not just a album,i saw many loves in this.However,the present that i sent was a scarf,it took my a mouth to make it ,i took lots of loves in it,these were the present i received and i sent.

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