高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文章中拼写错误较多，同时请作者增加词汇丰富度；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；连词使用偏少。

this is my bedroom. it's so beautiful. there are droplight on the wall. there is a computer on the table. there is a dresser in fornt of the wall. there is a mirror on the dresser. there is a toothpate and a toothbrush. and a gray towle. there are two cups on the small table. there is a duvet on the bed. there are two pillows on the dresser. there is a quilt on the bed.there is a sheet on the quilts. there is a green curtain and white wall.