高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；全文结构不够严谨，文中很少使用衔接词和过渡词；连词使用偏少。

This is my bedroom.It's so beautiful. There are droplight on the wall. There is a computer on the table. There is a dresser in front of the wall. There is a mirror on the dresser. There is a tooth pate and a toothbrush and a gray cloth. There are two cups on the small table. There is a duvet on the bed. There are two pillows on the dresser. There is a quilt on the bed. There is a sheet on the quilts. There is a green curtain and white wall. There is not a sofa, so I want buy a sofa.