小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Good friend I have many friends. Jessie is one of my best friends. She is very beautiful .She has big eyes and long hairs. Sweet smile is always on her face everyday.She is very sunny and active to what happened. She is good at all kinds of subjects.She often helps us when we are puzzled in our learning . All classmates love her!