2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦37:happy time

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Let Me Tell You My Dream I’m a middle school student from Guangming. I have a great dream. That’s to be a singer.I think music can make me happy and bring some happiness to people. I loved music when Iwas very young. I love popular music. It can make me relax when I feel tired. Iwant to be a singer like Wang Fei . Her songs make people comfortable and relaxed. Music is my favorit,To be a singer is my dream. I’ll try my best to make my dream come true.