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经常跟父母发火,甚至几天不讲话要求:
1、表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;
2、必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当的发挥;文中单词拼写做的很棒,再多积累些词汇就更好了;正确句子比例较高,适当增加复杂句的使用,文章会更出色;层次欠清晰,衔接成分很少。
Good morning, ladies and gentlemen. Today my topic is ‘Learning to get along with our parents’.These days, most of us feel it is hard to get along with our parents.We are often angry with our parents,even we don't talk with them many days.Because we think our parents just see our exam,not us.We often shout at them.So we should learn how to get along with them.We should more and more to talk with them.And we should also talk to them about our best idea,so we can solve some problem together.We should learn to help them do some housework. Let's change our life together! That’s all for my speech. Thank you!