小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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hello !I'm Fan ,I have a good friend, she name is Zoe ,en she is very lovely ,she have a long hair and big eyes ,small mouth and round face ,sometimes ,her's very quite ,but I think she is a goodness girl ,really ,I think she is very good girl ,she is my best friend