2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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welcome to my hometown my name is jake.Next I will introduce my hometown to you .first,this is a very beautiful place although it is not very famous.the sky is blue and the lake is green.The air is fresh whatver the season.Maybe it is the key of people who seldom get sick.