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Keeping A Good Mood Modern people are more inclined to suffer various phsycological problems from society,school or family,which pose great threats to the health development of our society and thus it is not uncommon that people go insane and the rate of suicide is on the rise.From my point of view,having a good mood is the only way out in terms of keeping people at ease. Why is it so important to keep a good mood?The following reasons can be good cases to illustrate my idea.Firstly,assorted pressure are penetrating into almost every corners of society.Never before are bearing so much loads,which,however,keeping a good mood can contribute to high work efficiency without pressure and therefore our life will be bright.Secondly,just as the saying put it:"Smile is the most direct way to make friends." Keeping a good mood enable you to impress others by your gentle face.Spicifically speaking,you friendship circle wiil be enlarged owe to your smile.Last but not least,keeping a good mood can get you rid of the hell of pressure ,keep you in health and ,moreover ,it will prolong you life. From the above-mentioned factors,a conclusion can be reached here is that keeping a good mood does benificial to us.Familiarity with sunshine mood will raise you passion to life.
