小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. She is a beauitful gril. She has a long black hair, two big black eyes and red month. Her voier is better. She is good at singing. She is a clever gril. She like resding books, playing computer and chess. She is also nice.She often holps us. Our classmaters like she very mucth.