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肥胖已经成为危害人们健康的严重问题，中小学生的肥胖趋势更为明显。你们班对此展开讨论。根据不同的观点，写一篇100词左右的短文。
2．中学生长身体的时候，减肥会影响身体发育，也会影响学习，因此应该顺其自然。
文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；有效的运用了一些复杂句；作者能较熟练地使用丰富的词汇，但请加强单词拼写的检查；请注意分段。
Now fatness is becoming a more and more serious problem .becaous of the development of our ecology and science ,serious of delious food jump out front of us ,on the other hand TV the internet games sometimes take the place of outdoor sports .I think these fact lead to students get more weight . But get too much weight can cause many desease besides damage your figure .SO if you want to stay healthy and keep good figure I think you need to keep your diet regular ,and do regular excersize .
