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2011年7月16日雅思大作文真题:the Development in Technology

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In modern society, advanced science and technology have made great changes to our life, but we still value the artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can arts tells us about life that the science technology can not.

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Arts appeared in human history far before science. It brings numerous individuals together to form a group which is long lasting and unique. Science changed human's life in a revolutionary way, it helps us better know about our surroundings and better adapted to it, also it facilitates the communication of arts and lead to a harmonious world. They boost each other and benefit humans in different ways. Science is a useful and strong tool to explore the unknown, usually bring tremendous changes to all walks of the society. The influences are so significant that arts sometimes can be affected. Like the introduction of new building materials in the 20th century had resulted in modern buildings. Science improves productivity of the society and increases the free flow of talents, which ensure the prosperity and popularity of arts in common peoples. Arts are something that human by nature pursue, they get consolation, recognized, enjoyed from the arts activities. Thus arts are necessity to human that can turned into economic driving forces. Movies, cartoons, music, paintings all are stepping into a new era that stimulate various industries and offer numerous positions. As a results, speeding up the science innovation and bear new technologies. In sum, science and arts are interacting with each other so closely that we don't need to differentiate their roles in our daily life. The one thing we should bear in mind is that both of them should be emphasized in an equal way.

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