2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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If my best friend come to China to visit me ,I would take him to walk around to show the interest place,such as the Great Wall in Beijing which has a long distance and there are many visitor visited it from home and abroad.The Great Wall is one of eight wonder of the world and it is historical as well powerful.Visitors