高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown was beautiful in the past ,green trees standed by road liked soilders,the river was clean.you can see fish swim clearly.the buildings in my hometown were samll and simple ,the roads also were narrow.however ,people in the hometown lived happily but now ,with the ecolomic become better and better ,we move into big buildings and drive cars,but the industry makes the environment bad ,more trees and more fish are gone.it is very emergency to control this and make changes ,only in that way ,we can have a better life.