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Modern people are more inclined to suffer various psychological problems from society,school or family,which pose great threats to the health development of our society and thus it is not uncommon that people go insane and the rate of suicide is on the rise.From my point of view,being in a good mood is the only way out to solve such problem. Why is it so essential to keep a good mood?The following reasons can be good cases to illustrate my idea.Firstly,assorted pressure are penetrating into almost every corners of society.Never before are people bearing so many loads,which,however,keeping a good mood can contribute to high work efficiency without pressure and therefore our life will be bright.Secondly,just as the saying put it:"Smile is the most direct way to make friends."Keeping a good mood enables you to impress others by your gentle face.Spicifically speaking,you working net will be enlarged because of your smile.Last but not least,keeping a good mood can get you rid of pressure ,keep you in good health and ,moreover ,it will prolong your life. From the above-mentioned factors,a conclusion being reached here is that keeping a good mood does beneficial to us.Familiarity with sunshine mood is capable of raising you passion to life.
