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字数：300 满分：100分
可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；作者词汇量积累不错，文中存在一些拼写错误；行文稍显不流畅，应增加文中衔接词的使用。
Make your pocket lighter As a college student, I'm pretty much confident that I've saved a lot during the last four years. Even more i've made a lot. I totally agree on keeping saving your daily money, and money will come back out of your exceptation. Since people are on pace to spend more money for various aspects, investment is still attrctive for me. Therefore, more time will be given to how to find a effective way for saving and investing for me. There're big differences between saving and just spending money as you want. The most unforgetten experience is from my second year in college. I got a part job nearby college, instead of being back home during the simmer holiday. It's exciting for me since it's the first time to have a job, whcih means making money by myself. With this kind of thinking, I'm tolerant for my free spending on anything i like. However, I've used out all half of my tuition at the end of summer holiday. I was shocked because there's no any sign that a collge boy can buy so many things that really are meanless. Finanlly i ask help from my parents. Meanwhile, i learned a lot from that expensive summer holiday. After that painful stroy, i've had a good habit, keeping records for spending every day. In this way, more ways for saving money come out. And i get more support from this good habit, since i use savings for my language traiining. In a conclusion, the way you spend your money defines where you would reach, especailly you're still a boy who need money in key moment.
