高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

文章词汇多样性要提升，且请仔细检查词汇的拼写；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词；建议平时练习中，多多背诵一些好的句子和文章。

it is a little thing happen with me.i hate zhaoliying so i come to her weibo.ok,i kown teis is too many sily and,i fell like it is too unintersted.but i did just yesteday. The little thing talk me a troube,having some people reply with me,by tha way,is no only one,have three,ok,have three. have a people ,she come from beijing,fuck,she look like a crazy dog,right?i realy realy hate her.because she took my english leval as a bad of studend.as well as she said,you just can said this,right? yech,i no baleif my english,and i no calm dowm,i have some uget and sadness.but ithrogh a thing at the free time,i am intrested in anther star-zhoudongyu.one day,she take a new weibo that she come to a new aperment,she use of english.but the women reply with same words.oh,she is a so bitch,a son of bitch