我喜欢英语,我想在10年以后当一位英语老师。我要尽可能教好我的学生。我要尽量用英语讲课。我要努力使我的课讲得生动有趣。
另外,学生们都喜欢听老师讲故事,所以我要经常给学生讲英语故事,使他们对英语感兴趣,从而能提高他们的听力。我相信我能成为一个好老师的。
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I have a dream, I want to be a English teacher after 10 years, because I like English. I will teach my students my best. I will speak English in my class. And I will have a interesting class.Teach students is good job. I will do my best. Students love to listen stories from teacher, so I must usually tell stories to my students.If I do that, students can be interested for English, and they will be good at listening. I believe I can be a good teacher.