小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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Good friend I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. She has a long black hair and two big black eyes and a red mouth.she has a better voice .she is good at singing and all kands of subjects. She likes playing computer games and chess. She often helps us ! All of the classmates love her.