小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

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My new teacher Miss Li is my new teacher this semester. She teaches us English.She is not only beautiful but also nice. She is strict with our study in English class. She has wide range of professinal knowlege and charming personality. We can obtain english with joyful activity from her class.when we make mistake, she always pick them out patiently and help us to correct immediately. After class, she likes communicate with us friendly. we all love her!