2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear XX: welcome to china！ As we all known ,china has long history in the past two thousand year.the long history appear to all over the world people every year . The Great Wall---IT's the place that i want show you around . why? why i chose there ? that’ because i love my country ,i love the great bluit and i feel very pound of my country's achievent .The Great Wall lies in the capital of china --Beijing.it's built by the first king of china.it's two thousand year so far .according to the record ,the great wall took ten billion chinese people to bluid . all in all ,it's worth visating if you want to learn china.