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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

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Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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It"s well known to everyone that if one received more education he will be likely to get a job what he wishes and enjoy a better life.from this chart.we can see that the person who received doctoral degree has a lowest unemployee rate in 2010.on the contrary.the person who only to received a high school diploma or even not get any education.he will be very likely to face with a high unemployment in the future. From what has been mentioned above.we can naturally come to the conclusion that it is worthwhile to put an large investment into education.because the education pays for you is very high.for one thing.if one receive more education.he will have more understangding hiself who will devoted hiself into country in return.for another.its of great importance reduce the crime and has great benefits to build harmony society. what has been mentioned above.we can naturally come to the conclusion that education pays do more good to us.only in this way.can a social unemployment rate would be reduce.

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