2012年8月9日雅思大作文真题:the Social Interaction

作者词汇基础扎实，拼写也很棒；文章层次较为清晰；若增加一些从句的使用，文章会更不错。

Electronics has boosted the development of communication, and we are experiencing a more connected world than ever before. The convenience brought by mobile phones and the Internet was so obvious, but some negative impacts are also rising. Especially wire fraud and the estranging between peoples. The expansion of cellphone and Internet users has greatly facilitated the communication and accelerated the productivity of the world. It can be expressed as a leap and bound progress compared with the post service, which may take far more time to write, send, and reply. Telecom service allow instant messenger by which we can realize instant communication through one single terminal. Another significant change is the way it promotes the economy. The E-commerce shows its vitality since it was introduced. It constitute a large proportion of trade activity, which means the economy can shed more costs and become more efficient. The benefits can also been seen by our consumers. But such convenience can also have some disadvantages when they are got hold by some evildoers. Fraud was the most common thing initiated by these people which cause severe damage to averages economically. They changed into various forms to cheat on citizens, which can be very puzzle and hard to trace. The next concern may attribute to the highly dependency upon these electronic devices by individuals which turn out to be harmful to a healthy relationship between people. To conclude, the telecom service will continue to bring fantastic changes to our world, to make the most of it and avert the potential damage of it, we should be aware of how to use it properly.