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文章词汇表达比较丰富，但学术词汇稍显欠缺，此外拼写检查要重视；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；适当丰富句式。
As we all known to that there have been exists a popular social phenomenon about excessive packaging on the market. on the one hand.if one goods with fancy wrapping.it will attract most of people to look and buy it.at the same time.the person who possesses the goods will have a great profit from it.on the other hand.the excessive packaging will waste a lot of materials and lead to much litters on the ground.so how can we make the good use of packaging. admittedly.from what has been mentioned above .we can come to the conclution that the excessive packaging is do more harm than good to our envirment.and it just the opposite to what we wish to build a harmony society.but it doesnt follow that we should not packaging reasonably.from my point of my view.i think the reasonable packaging is essential to our goods.to a degree.a reasonable packaging may be a key to sell it as soon as possible.
