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Nowadays.internet has been playing an increasingly important role in day-to-day life.first. people can shopping for their favorites through the internet without leave their home.besides.internet has provided a variety of information.which we just have an easy access to gather information in a short time.and with internet.we have saved a lot of time for myself.most inportant of all.internet has become a part of our daily life. at the same time.many people fail to make good use of internet.their are addicted to playing various computers games by internet. they can stay at home in a day and night which is just surf the internet.their are rely on internet so much that have occupied their most of time.which is just the opposite direction what they wishes. admittedly.there are many advantages for internet.from my point of view.if one can make the best of internet.he will benefit a lot from it.
