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Good friends! Let me see,do i have a good friends? yes? i do. but wait! who is the best friends for me? i have no idea. that's so bad! Anyway.I do have some good friends. pepole can't live without friends. that's the truth, do you agree with that?Good friends like a book you can learning much from them,and good friends like a coffee when you feel tire you just need a cup of coffee. that is good friend ! everybody need friends!