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My new teacher is English,He is outgoing,and friendly,He has short black hair and two big black eyes,He always wears white shirt and dark blue pants,and black shoes. He's class is interest,and funny,He always said that learn English change life! Because English is international language,and good skill,I study English for making diferent friends!