作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;请作者增加词汇表达的丰富度,对拼写检查也要重视;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用;请注意分段。
Nowadays,English,which is used widely all over the world is important. We can introduce our country to the world in English. In addition to that,we can study the technology of developed countries when we know more about English.The reason why we do this is that we can do better on dutying our country .It's interesting for us to learn English.