高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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my homeland is a beautiful village.there are green forest, clean water and blue sky. in the morning, many kinds of birds sing the song,people work hard in the farm. in the evening, children play at the ground together, run,laugh,etc. people sit around the children, talk with each other, enjoy the happiness after hard work.