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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第3套):网络沟通

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:41浏览次数:12977
要求:

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the Internet on the way people communicate and then explain whether electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
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作者学术词汇使用比较准确,词汇表达较丰富,但仍需增加词汇积累;有效地采用了多种衔接方法,层次清晰;简单的使用了一些复杂句,但从句使用不充分;请注意分段;副词使用偏多。

用户练习作文:

In the time of science and technology have a great developing.Online communication play an important role.Naturally,Online communication become a universal situation Online communication not only convenient and fast,but also not restricted by region and transportation.But I still think Online communication can not replace face to face contact. Because It Is necessary for us to communication feelings in the contemporary of emotional indifference.The most important is face to face contact can impress own willing more clear when face some things of complex From above, Even if the Online communication has a lot of advantages,However,face to face contact is more not allow to ignore in the contemporary.

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