小学一年级英语作文:My dog

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There is a dog in my family,his name is dude.Dudu is a fat dog which love to eat all the time.Dudu is nine years old,he has accomplish me when I was a baby,we play together ,and he make lots of fun to me.I love my dog Dudu,he is an important member in my family.