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I think your party is fun. But I'm sorry, because my mother have been ill.The doctor told her to stay on the bed. And I have to look after her. So I won't join your party. Thank you to you give me a beautiful postcard, I like it. I put it on my desk.At last,I wish you the best in your great party. Yours, Han Mei