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The news that some big cities government agencies have been discussing whether or not private cars should be put on pullution tax,which arouse a hot debate among the public.Some citizens are still clinging to the idea that such policies should be carried out,while those who believe the opposite think that governments have no business forcing them to pay for their cars' emissions.From my point of view,it is extremely essential to reduce cars'emissions by such environmental regulars. The following factors contribute to the production of my opinion.Far and foremost,the growth of people 's living standards makes private cars easily available.Convenient as cars are ,we can not lose sight of the fact that private cars do put more burdens on our living environment,especially in metropolitans.Moreover,with indulgent education from parents,many youngsters from well-being families are more tend to drive casually without paying a little attention on passersby,which is the reason why the rate of traffic accidents in on the rise and also a reflection of social morality in decline . The two analyses above expose us to the conclusion that putting a "pullution tax" on private cars dose have necessity,just as water to fish,so is a friendly pure environment to us.Tax on cars'emissions will not only cultivate the awareness of reducing emissions among car-owners,but also lead to the invention of energy-saving private cars,namely environment protection.
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