假如你叫Han Mei,你的笔友Mary邀请你去参加聚会。请你用英语写一封信给Mary。
3、谢谢她寄来的漂亮的明信片, 你很喜欢,将它放在书桌上。
文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨;请提高文章内敛性,段落和句子要围绕主题展开;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。
I think your party is fun. But I'm sorry, because my mother have been ill.The doctor told her to stay on the bed. And I have to look after her. So I won't join your party. I like you give me a postcard. I put it on my desk.At last,I wish you the best in your great party.yours, Han Mei