高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown In the past ,my small hometown was surrounded by hills and trees.In the clean river,there were many kinds of fish swimming freely and happily.What's more,buildings in my hometown were in simple styles and the roads were narrow.People lived by ploughing and their lives were not so rich.Howevower,in today,everything around my hometown has changed and it grown into a big city .Tall buildings and big factories stand up in this city.The road becomes larger and many sorts of cars running on the street.But there also leads to many problems because of this change.With the development of industry,our environment falls into a bad situation.Trees are cut and become less and less.Fishes in the water have been distincted.Thus,the urgent task or problem we face is to control and solute the problem of pollution.