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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17600
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分61.0分
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若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用;文章用了较为丰富的词汇,学术词汇略显单薄,同时注意单词拼写的检查;请注意分段。

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The rescources of snap judgements from all aspects of our life can never be worthy of trust. Snap judgements spread from small things by our sides to the judgement of death in the court. As a wisdom person, we can not easily accept and trust the decision. Now we take an example. Web shopping is becoming more and more popular for its convenience and cheap in our daily life. A variety of stores on the web sell kinds of grocies such as clothes, appliance and so on. So it is difficulty for consummers to choose the appropriate grocy. Maybe someone should have bought some cheap grocy but bad grocy or be cheated by the fraud or lost a great of much money.

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