字数:200满分:100分
作者词汇量偏少,但单词拼写做的不错;从句使用熟练;过程性词汇偏少;请注意分段。
In the above drawing, a young man is struggling to finish the running competition. when he arrive in the ending,he feel relaxed and think he has try his best to complete this race and has reach the top in this way. Then,this younger is shocked that he is in the begin line again. what's the drawer tends to convey is that we should pay our efforts to our working and studying consistently.