2011年考研英语作文真题:旅程之“余”

作者句法知识扎实，但文中从句数量稍显不足；作者词汇量积累不错，能较灵活地使用学术词汇；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

From what is vividly depicted in the above cartoon,we can see clearly that some people in our life is still lack of the awareness of environmental protection.The terrible scene illustrates that two tourists are chatting and eating happily on a boat and casually throwing their rubbish into the lake which is full of a variety of litter and waste. We can acquire too much due to its far profound and lasting influence. Nowadays,though the awareness of protecting enviroment is being accepted by more and more people,we can still see a great number of undesirable scenes especially in scenic districts.Why does this odd phenomenon occur?On the basis of my observation,two factors are contributed to it.First and foremost,to some people,the consciousness protecting environment is still not so strong.They may not think it is a big deal to throw rubbish everywhere.In addition,the environment management system is not satisfying.For instance,there are few regulations in some places or the implementation is seldom performed actually. In short,it is very urgent to take some effective and relative measures.In the first place,we should continue to conduct more propaganda in communities and schools so as to let people realize the importance of protectiong environment.In the second place,more rules should be made and carried out by government to restrain the conduction of destroying environment.People should work together to creat clean and beautiful surroundings.