甘肃武威六中2013届高三第二次模拟试卷英语作文

拼写很棒，可适当增加学术词汇的使用；作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；文章结构不够严谨，应增加过程性词汇的使用；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开。

There are growing concern about Internet Slang.And there are two opinions about this situation. Some students,in their belief,said that Internet Slang is the language which is vivid as well as fashionable. Internet Slang is filled in humor and intelligence.It is convenience for people to chat in the Internet . Others have a opposite position. Internet Slang is short of ideological level . Not all of people understand and accept. Using this more, people can't understand even misunderstand. From my perspective,using limited Internet Slang not only will have fun in chatting but also will increase emotion between them. In conclusion,everyone has their power to use Internet Slang but we could use less.