小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my friend,Nancy. she is a beautiful woman.she is very tall.she is a doctor.she is hard-working .she favourite naimal is a cat. she favourite foods chicken.she facourite star Caiyilin she favourite game is doudizhu.she favourite colour pink .she favourite book new concept English.she think English is very interesting.she going to learm English well.