小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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my friend,Nancy. she is a beautiful woman.she is very tall.she is a doctor.she is hard-working .she likes animal is a cat. she likes foods chicken.she likes star Caiyilin she likes game is doudizhu.she favourite colour pink .she favourite book new concept English.she thinks English is very interesting.she going to learm English well.