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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:45909
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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有效地使用了语句间的衔接成分;句式灵活多变,再加强从句的使用会更棒;作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多。

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According to the figure in the line graph,it can be seen that lower unemployment rates to the high degree people,howerove high school diploma and less than high school diploma to the high unimployment rates,while obviously,that is a kind the unfair phenomenon.but why? Today,higher degree in difficulty gain,but less than high school diploma so easy acquire,so worke choose is clearly,higher degree have good work,receive very high wages in the month,in addition don't worry unemployment rates. Less than the people of high school diplomais very many,high unemployment rates for socially that impact.so government want sovle to thing. From what has been discussed above,we may conclude that heher degree have lower unemployment rates.

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