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中考考前作文集中训练附范文14:How to keep healthy

发布时间:2014-05-29 17:51浏览次数:409
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身体健康是我们每个人的追求,如何保持健康,是我们共同探究的问题。请以“How to keep healthy”为题,写一篇短文。80词左右。 
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文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;简单句比重过高,另应加强复杂句的练习;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用;请注意分段。

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How to keep healthy? It is important to have a healthy body. More and more people want to keep in good health. But how to keep healthy? I have some ideas. First we should eat healthy food."An apple a day keeps the doctor away". So we should eat more vegetables and fruits to instead junk foods. We should drink milk everyday, too. Second we should exercise a lot. Doing sports is a good way to keep healthy. Third we should have a good hobby. And we should have a good rest ,too. Just do like this, then we will have a healthy body.

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