作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习;作者能较灵活地使用词汇表达,但要多积累学术词汇;层次不清晰,几乎没有使用衔接词。
Lydia is my new teacher. She is a beautiful woman. she likes to play with us after school.We all like her. As an English teacher, Lydia always tells us if we want to improve our level of English, we need speaking more and listening more. prastise makes perfect. Lydia likes playing basketball. she also likes sing a Englishe song. she promise that she will teach a English song in the class in this week's class. we are so happy to listen to this news.