小学一年级英语作文:Jim's family

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There is a photo for Jim's family. the man on the right is Jim's father, He is a teacher and working in NO.6 school. the woman near Jim is his mother, she is a reporter, she works for China daily. in the middle ,There is a handsome boy, this is Jim. He is a five years old boy. He likes playing basketball the picter of Jim's family was taken last year on the travel in China.