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文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；正确句子比例较高，适当增加复杂句的使用，文章会更出色；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。
Nowadays, more and more people make friends online. As i know, different people have different opinions Some people are agree to make on-line friends. Firstly, they can make wide friends. Secondly , they can describe free what they are thinking. Thirdly, it's convenient for study foreign language. Some people are disagree to make on-line friends. Firstly, it's waste their a lot of time. Secondly, it's disadvantage to study. Thirdly, we maybe to be cheated. In my opinion, people should use internet in a right way.
