小学二年级英语作文:My holiday

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My holidays always make me happy. Summer vacation is my favorite holidy since my parent always take to other countrys for traveling. This year, My Mum with me visited Japan in my vacation. we went to Daban and Toyko. but I like Toyko more because Disneyland in Toyko. I like Japanese food sush as Sushi and fish. But my Mum doesn't like it. I wish I can eat Sushi for every meal but my Mom thought this is a crazy action. in the result, she only permitted me eating Sunshi for supper. The most favorite place for me is Disneyland. there are so many beautuiful and lovely building in the Disney. I brought a Minny's cap and a big box popcorn for myself. But I like the small world best. in the small world, there are full of hundreds of toy in colourful dress sing the lovely song. what a amasing place! I like my holidays, I hope everyday is holiday and my Mom don't need to work and I don't need to go to school.