高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My town Last year, my town had some trees,it is green. Has a sdream,there had more fish.Athough,had some poor houses ,narrow stress.people very poor. But now,some hight and beautiful builds ,everywhere has cars . In my place, acorroudings is destoryed,fewer and fewer trees,less and less water .So we can protect enviroment.