正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,可是单词拼写做的不错;衔接词汇很少,建议加强过渡词和连接词的积累;连词使用偏少。
My scool is Guangming primary school.It's in Guangminglou street,Dongcheng district,Beijing. I like my school. There are 2,000 students in school. There are total 36 classes in there. I am in class 5 grade 3. I have math, Chinese,Englsih and PE subjects. my teachers are kindness and responsibility. I like all teachers who once teached me. Our headmaster is a famous educator in China, he loves every students in school and he cares our diet. we all love him.