小学三年级英语作文:When I grow up

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What is my dream when I grow up? To be the turth, I want to be a inventer although the dream is a bit big. I will invent some things that can change the world and make the world more beautiful and peaceful. you know, just like Steve Jobs, in his short but meaningful life, he invented six productions such as Iphone, Mac, Itunes and Itouch ... , these productions changed the world through changed people's life style and thinking. I want invent a kind of cooth which can make the people fly when they put on the cloth. I also want invent some midicines for cancer patient. To make my dream become true, I will make progress in my everyday.